This is unbelievably creepy - I really think this might be better than the trailer!! This is my favorite thing from you guys yet - keep up the great work!!
Sarah A. Posted 5 months ago
This reminds me of a criminal minds episode where the killer dresses all her victims up as dolls and sedated them
Kiki B. Posted 5 months ago
Soooo creepy, you guys really got a lock on the awkward horror suspense thing. Hope you can get this made
Zoltan M. Posted 5 months ago
Freaky! I think it is awesome thing to watch this suspense fangirl horror film! Doll face, wow it is a pretty incredible scene and done in a way that is so mysterious and yet light hearted that you can not help be entranced. Just the soundtrack and the actress in her dismay. I don't know what the story is but I picture like a kidnap plot judging by the guy that pops up in the end. I don't know I haven't looked at the other videos from this filmmaking team but it says I should use my imagination to keep telling the story. From what I've seen though I think the makers of this film can tell a way better story than I.
Rob E. Posted 5 months ago
Omg, that's so creepy. This film gives me the heebie jeebies. I just want her to get out of the house!!! That last moment is super freaky.
Meaghan D. Posted 6 months ago
The thriller story line is pretty good however the acting seems bad. hopefully it`s just because of the speechless video.
Robert T. Posted 6 months ago
Really awesome job on this mission. I think the story is fascinating. And I also really loved the music!
LIs D. Posted 6 months ago
Very interesting work. Needs a little help on the acting front but has lots of potential for a movie.
Maddox L. Posted 6 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
reshma c. Posted 6 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Sebastian C. Posted 6 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Ari M. Posted 6 months ago
You have a suitably twisted idea for the film. This definitely works better than your teaser though I would have liked to get a better picture of your whole concept. A lot to ask, I know. Good job.
Dean S. Posted 6 months ago
This is pretty interesting. I would like to have seen you guys push a bit harder even, maybe with set dec.
Ryan C. Posted 6 months ago
I am definitely intrigued by your concept though I am not sure the best parts come through here. Nonetheless this is creepy which ID good.
Zach H. Posted 6 months ago
I'm going to forgive production value for now assuming that if you had money it would be another story. I think this has potential for sure.
Kevin L. Posted 6 months ago
This looks pretty interesting. I wish I had a better idea of your story, but what happens here is pretty clear and messed up. That first time we see the poster over her shoulder you think its the guy.
Mike T. Posted 6 months ago
well done but still have no real idea what this movie is going to be like and i have never seen a phone dial just by picking it up before
Michael I. Posted 6 months ago
Your team is making a huge effort as evidenced by the quality of this. I thought it was pretty intense.
George D. Posted 6 months ago
This is a pretty creepy video. The dizzying camera move helps convey the character's mental state. And the viewer is always waiting for the other shoe to drop.
Jeffrey C. Posted 6 months ago
I actually really like all the supporting pics you choose. I feel like I am learning about your process.
Donald Y. Posted 6 months ago
This was nicely done. It would really have spoiled it if someone answered the phone. It was scary and threatening. I wonder if this team is going to mature into comedy productions.
Glen M. Posted 6 months ago
You guys are admittedly a bit rough around the edges, but I think there is a story here, and definitely a thought-out approach to suspense.
Jack W. Posted 6 months ago
I don't really get the critique of day shooting - It's an interesting choice - the danger despite the safety of daytime.
AJ S. Posted 6 months ago
I did not enjoy this at all. No terror or suspense. I felt would have been in the evening. I felt u missed the mark
Jeannette L. Posted 6 months ago
I think it would have been scarier if the scene was shot at night. For some reason the daylight made the house look cheerful. Maybe I was expecting ominous?
jane D. Posted 6 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Jenny A. Posted 6 months ago
Nice try but did not cut it for me. I didn't feel the scene was strong and lacked a door to the plot.
Jenny A. Posted 6 months ago
Nice try but did not cut it for me
Kathy M. Posted 6 months ago
The "speechless" cover art for this mission was very clever, and the video was super creepy and very tense.
Kim B. Posted 6 months ago
Very good !
Savannah O. Posted 7 months ago
Creepingly awesome!! It kept me on the edge of my seat for sure. Also, the cover art for this mission is totally freaky! In an awesome Doll Face way, of course! :)
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Glad you liked it! *SPOILER* The cover photo is photoshopped but is part of the script, so you can expect to see it in the feature film.
Bruce E. Posted 7 months ago
This clip could have been more intense and more dramatic. The abductee's expressions could have shown a more urgent need to connect with someone outside the apartment...
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Certainly, acting is not an easy thing to do despite what people may think. Jade has done an excellent job for us given that she has no training as an actress.
Paul S. Posted 7 months ago
It is different. I am still undecided as to what I think
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Different is what we're going for! Hopefully the next few missions will help you decide.
Blake N. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Cameron P. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Matthew J. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Grayson L. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Nolan B. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Henry H. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Nathaniel B. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Elliot T. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Brody R. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Colton M. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Nadia V. Posted 7 months ago
This reminds me of am episode of criminal minds. I think a better location would help and how the heck can she get to a phone...too predicable
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
We have heard that and while we haven't seen the episode, other people have brought it to our attention and we are confident that the script is significantly different than the episode, however we do intend to watch it when we can. Location is uncontrolable with no budget, we've been working with what we have since the Accelerator started. The feature film would obviously be made in a different location. This is a typical horror scene, the music is a dead give away that something will happen, so of course it's predictable. But what happens now that he has her?
Gail M. Posted 7 months ago
I'm tired of watching yukky stuff.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
As you made no direct comment about our video, I'm not sure what you are trying to accomplish. We appreciate all helpful feedback, but this seems to serve no purpose except to criticize all teams in the competition. I believe that we as well as all of the other teams have made a great effort with little or no money to create a "concept" for a movie. I'm sorry you haven't liked anything, but constructive criticism will improve the quality so that maybe we'll make something you do enjoy.
David B. Posted 7 months ago
This is unbelievably creepy - I really think this might be better than the trailer!! This is my favorite thing from you guys yet - keep up the great work!!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
That's what we're going for, thanks a bunch!
Sharon R. Posted 7 months ago
That's creepy - it's a tough challenge and the camera trick with the dude appearing at the end for sure made me jump. The concept could have been stronger for me though. Overall, a tough challenge. Way to go.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, it was a tough one!
Blake M. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Eli L. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Micah S. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Ben B. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Emmett M. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Avery L. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Nicholas G. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Charlie S. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Benjamin T. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Parker L. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Peter M. Posted 7 months ago
I think this trailer is a little slow in its suspense building but nicely put together.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we love to have feedback!
Channy K. Posted 7 months ago
sort of unrelated but i like that you have a ton of pictures for this mission. as well i am not a fan of horror movies mainly when things jump out at you so i like the suspense prep in the slowly rotating cam.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks! We try to include all optional material we're allowed for each mission, most of the time it has been pictures; on mission 4 "Off the Wall|" we got to include a video as extra as well as some pictures.
Dalton P. Posted 7 months ago
Liked the score which built the suspense to the point of the villian appearing besdie her, the posters added to the tension, like someone was watching her-not a huge fan of horror movies, don't need that kind of rush!!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Well we are diverging from the typical Gore films and trying for a more emotional experience in thrills and chills.
Paulina J. Posted 7 months ago
It was kinda cool how the first poster on the wall that was revealed made it seem like someone was watching. It made me do a double take
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
LoL, wish i could take credit, it was a happy coincidence as we did not redecorate the home before we shot.
Sandra M. Posted 7 months ago
Very interesting scene. Music choice set the tension. Not a huge fan of Horror. Good Luck in future missions.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Strangely enough, I don't mind suspense but am not a huge fan of horror either. Just writing the script I freaked myself out a few times.
Aiden C. Posted 7 months ago
The scene itself is well shot and does a good job of setting up tension. i am not sure about her actions though as why would she not just call 911?
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
There are reasons she did not call 911. You would need more background to understand that. but off the top of my head, what if he was a cop? I'm not saying that he is, just one reason why someone might not call 911.
Aiden C. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks for the reply on my comment. I understand that those of us watching what you have put together have a incomplete picture. Now I am curious on the reason.
Wanda S. Posted 7 months ago
This makes me wonder "who is inside the garbage bags?" at 0:43. Maybe a former dollhouse resident? The cover page photo is excellent.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
There is in fact someone in the garbage bags, but you'll have to vote for us if you want to know more :)
Andrea K. Posted 7 months ago
This was nice and creepy. You toy with our expectations in a John Carpenter way. You keep expecting and expecting and then only when you think it isn't going to happen he's there.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Wow, thanks. I don't think I deserve to be mentioned in the same sentence as Mr. Carpenter, but the compliment is greatly appreciated!
Jana S. Posted 7 months ago
Very creepy. I liked the one continuous cut. I agree that the dialling was really quick. Interested to see more.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we intend to bring you more.
Michelle G. Posted 7 months ago
I like the camera work, moving around her. I don't get who she's supposed to be calling - wouldn't she call 911 if she were in trouble? Not really my genre - I need things to make sense.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Sorry it didn't make sense for you, a lot of information is lost without dialogue and background. There is a reason why the scene played the way it did, but you'd have to watch the full movie to truly understand what is happening.
Michelle G. Posted 7 months ago
it's true. maybe try working on creating scenes that the viewer will understand or be able to follow with that still create a sense of mystery and intrigue. I understand that is difficult to accomplish in 90 seconds, but other competitors have and that may be the difference between making it to the top 40 and the top 10. that's my two cents - obviously everyone will feel differently about different projects.
Allen M. Posted 7 months ago
Haunting and very tense. This film's got the makings of a pretty terrifying thriller. Who was she calling???
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
She was calling ... Ah you'll just have to wait and see the feature film ;) Thanks for the support.
Frank D. Posted 7 months ago
She picked up the phone and it automatically dialled. I get what you were going for but this could have been shot much better
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
She pressed "speed dial", sorry you didn't like it, we'll try much harder on the next mission.
Jen P. Posted 7 months ago
Really well done. I was a bit skeptical but you guys pulled this off. The shots are great as well as the acting.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we're happy you enjoyed it!
Colin T. Posted 7 months ago
I agree with some posts below, I think this came a long way from your trailer and the music was creepy.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Greatly appreciated!
Ewa B. Posted 7 months ago
The soundtrack and acting didn't match up. There wasn't enough intensity in the actress. I feel while on the phone should be frantically looking around to see if anyone is coming.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you for the advice!
Michael L. Posted 7 months ago
How can I not support a fellow horror/suspense film? I think you have a handle on the fundamentals. Although I would really like to see this team GO BIG soon! Hopefully another mission comes along to afford you the opportunity again. Cool reveal of the Stalker. I don't want to sound creepy, but I think you should use 'voyeurism' techniques in your approach to future cinematography for this film... its an easy way to ramp up suspense and to make the most of your 'intimate' location. And doesn't cost a penny. -- [Mr. Tom]
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we will consider that for future missions!
Super A. Posted 7 months ago
Nicely shot without the rig. This might perhaps be better than the trailer. I find it very disturbing, this is in a good way of course. Good luck!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we were hoping people would find it to be a big improvement over the trailer. Applying what we've learned through the Film Accelerator and continuing to get better!
Michael M. Posted 7 months ago
Without a dolly rig..was that a pun..good shots...I'm liking this more than the trailer...more subtle terror.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, I like to think we've grown since shooting the trailer and have learned a great deal. We are very thankful to Cinecoup and all of the fans who have taken the time to help us improve the quality of our work!
Melissa C. Posted 7 months ago
Nice creepy music to help create the scene. I think you did a good job with the mission. As you said it is hart to get a lot out in 90 sec.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks Melissa, it really is, especially with no dialogue, there's no back story so the audience doesn't have a connection to the victim.
Donal O. Posted 7 months ago
So other than the knot it's a great trailer. It may have been cool to see her lips sewn shut like in the picture. Also, it would have been creepier if he came out of the darkness instead of the light. It feels like the symbolism of an angel rather than a demon.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Excellent advice, lighting has been our biggest challenge, I would have loved darkness. As for the lips sewn shut, that is the punishment in the feature. The picture was a hint of things to come.
Donal O. Posted 7 months ago
That's a brutal punishment. That alone would warrant the production
Zoe T. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Lily J. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Ella H. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Hailey H. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
I believe someone else mentioned that. We'll try for next time.
Emily M. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, I think we've improved a ton since the trailer and will continue to improve with all of the wonderful feedback we've been receiving.
Brenden M. Posted 7 months ago
Sooooooo creepy. The usage of crooked frames helps sell the creepiness. Lot's of suspense the whole way through.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, the crooked frame was an experiment and I felt I had gone too far on the angle. Glad to hear it worked for you!
Branden S. Posted 7 months ago
i guess stitching your mouth together is one way of remaining speechless hey? tighten the rope!!!!!!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Rofl, thanks!
Ashley T. Posted 7 months ago
It is really coming along guys. Keep up the good work. I hope you guys make it to the next round. i want to see more
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we hope so too and appreciate all of the feedback so far!
Kenzie T. Posted 7 months ago
I cant quite tell if she is untying herself while her eyes are closed or not. I would have liked more of a reaction to waking up and discovering she is tied up
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Good point, she was actually supposed to be conscious, my fault with a bad angle that makes her eyes look closed.
Mack t. Posted 7 months ago
You guys have done it again. Each week it is something better. I really hope you guys win this. Good luck
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, much appreciated! We intend to film this regardless, but winning would certainly make it a better film.
Ashley T. Posted 7 months ago
It is really coming along great. I definitely agree that the rope wasn't tight enough but that is my only complaint
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks! We had to sacrifice due to time, plus that was the only length we had, so it was incredibly difficult to get a knot that looked good and took a short amount of time to remove.
Heather T. Posted 7 months ago
It's not bad. I would like to see the rest of the movie. the stuff on the walls are a little distracting but good so far
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Location limitations, people live there and open their home to us. We can only go so far in terms of set decoration. Thanks for the input!
Ashley S. Posted 7 months ago
i like the camera angles. I just wish i had a chance to clean up the house a bit before you guys showed it off. :)
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Rofl, sorry Ashley.
manoj p. Posted 7 months ago
Personally, this did not work for me too much. I like the fact that you stuck to the challange, but just that is not enough. Anyhow, I'm sure you guys can do better. Keep at it! Good luck!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, much better to come!
Vaibhav R. Posted 7 months ago
As another person before me pointed out, the knot really wasn't convincing at all and the woman didn't seem as frantic as the situation called for. But all in all, nice effort.
Natalia N. Posted 7 months ago
I also agree. The actress I feel should've been a little more frightened given the situation.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Only Entirely, thanks Super Fan ;) She's doing her best and we appreciate all that Jade has done but without any formal training she's literally doing us a favor and putting up with the long hours to help out.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, totally accurate assessment.
Aakash s. Posted 7 months ago
I think what has happened is that the expressions and body language are not as intense as the plot or the sound. As a result, you can see that there is untapped potential. Hoping for the best!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, yes we agree.
Alexa S. Posted 7 months ago
Not bad. The concept is nice - the girl trying to get to the phone and the guy catching her before she can - but I think you could have depicted it a little more dramatically.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Honestly the scene was written with a more violent confrontation but we can't do the stunt work so it was modified from the intended script.
Aaron j. Posted 7 months ago
Nice. I like how the sequence works even without the presence of speech in it, but I think you guys could still do a better job. Good luck, guys!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, I agree it could have been better. Location limitations, as well as financial issues prevent us from doing the best job we could.
Gill R. Posted 7 months ago
I think that knot was far too easily undone, it didn't seem challenging at all. And with her legs not being tied, she wouldn't need to untie her hands to use the phone anyway. And why not call the police?
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks for your comments, you want a lot packed into a 90 second clip but there are reasons for all of it in the script. Vote for us and we'd be happy to show you.
Gill R. Posted 7 months ago
I think that's missing the point somewhat. Glossing over things is probably less likely to result in votes than to encourage them. In fact, the clip would probably have been more effective if it was 88 seconds of her struggling to escape and then 2 seconds revealing that he instantly captures her again. Just a thought from an impartial observer.
Afzal H. Posted 7 months ago
This was amazing! You made it work with whatever resources you had, which is what counts at the end. I love how you used visuals on the wall to intensify the scene - the posters were telling the audience subconsciously that she was being watched, which made the ending really powerful. Great job guys!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you so very much!
Travis B. Posted 7 months ago
well done, definately left me with an unsettling feeling. Dolly could have been a little more anxious, and a little curious why she didn't dial 911..
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
We'd love to show you why she didn't dial 911, vote for us and we'll make the movie. :)
Ryan P. Posted 7 months ago
hmmm, I'm not feeling any sense of urgency on the part of the lady character...THO I must admit I have not seen any other trailers for this film yet.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Out of context, even with the other videos. It was a tough challenge for sure. We were simply trying to demonstrate a scene from the movie with no dialogue but not knowing the character or the situation certainly limits the ability to understand the scene.
Ryan P. Posted 7 months ago
I must say I do like the poster with her lips sewed up tho...that alone makes me interested. :)
Eric T. Posted 7 months ago
I'd like to see more of the house she's trapped in. It must be well-sealed if she's so loosely tied? With a little quicker pacing and creepier lighting I think you would have a great scene here.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, location limited lighting, the feature will be lit better/appropriately. It's out of context, I would love to show the rest of the house and why she was so loosely bound, vote for us and we'd be happy to make the movie. :)
Erin C. Posted 7 months ago
Interesting scene, but I don't understand, if she's trying to escape then why doesn't she seem more desperate?
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Taking a scene out of context with an untrained actress, it's not going to look the way the feature film would appear. Thanks for the question.
Jessica L. Posted 7 months ago
Kind of creepy music. but it really helps set the mood and tell what kind of movie scene it will be.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, the music was creepy.
Eric M. Posted 7 months ago
Interesting idea and good use of camera movement. Yes the acting could have been better but these are concepts people. Let's look passed the imperfections and try to see these movies for what they could be.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, that means a lot to all of us!
Peter B. Posted 7 months ago
That's exactly my issue!! The acting has to be top notch for a suspenseful movie such as this. The fact that she stood by the phone so casually and calmly didn't sell if for me. sorry.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
We appreciate the feedback, thank you.
John K. Posted 7 months ago
It was ok but not your best work. As others have pointed out she didn't seem entirely desperate or believable.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Good point, Jade is doing us a favor and trying her best to play the part but she's new to acting. We have others in mind for the feature film. Thank you.
Paul D. Posted 7 months ago
There is no real sense of urgency here. Who is she calling? And why is she waiting on the line so long? Just call 911!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Well it is difficult to give back story in a 90 second clip, but I understand what you're saying. We will keep that in mind going forward. P.S. when does the girl ever do that smart thing in a horror movie? ;) LoL
Skye B. Posted 7 months ago
Great potential. Love this concept.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, we were hoping everyone would love it.
Roy H. Posted 7 months ago
I'm struggling to feel any intensity in the scene. I feel its the lighting and the characters seem disconnected
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Lighting was a difficult issue due to location, and the actors are not professionals at this point in the process. I see what you mean and we appreciate the feedback.
John L. Posted 7 months ago
A little too shaky on camera work. Villain needs to go to fright school. Concept has possibilities but needs tightening up.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Yes, without a dolly that can be tough. Felt better exaggerating the movement than trying to minimize it and have it come off as forced. We had a suggestion earlier to use a wheel chair, which we intend to do in the future unless we acquire said dolly rig.
John W. Posted 7 months ago
Nice try but I did not find it creepy, scary or intense, I guess I expected more. A little too simplistic, perhaps more movement in the shots
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks, we'll consider that for future shots.
Yvonne L. Posted 7 months ago
Too bright and light in the shot....more shadows please. it makes things more moody and intense.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks for the input. Location limits didn't allow for that, but I agree.
jane D. Posted 7 months ago
Awesome!
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
I agree LOL!
Emersen Z. Posted 7 months ago
Good idea and good pacing
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thank you, much appreciated.
Dana B. Posted 7 months ago
What? Who's the non scary guy in the house?
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Watch the trailer :)
Michelle H. Posted 7 months ago
I didn't really find it creepy,or intense. I kinda think I wanted to be scared more,it was lacking suspense.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks for the comments, what could we have done to improve the suspense for you?
Michelle H. Posted 7 months ago
I re-watched and I was thinking maybe the lighting? It is so bright , and I guess when you are panning around there are so many walls ect. That someone could be hiding it didn't seem like he just "popped" out of norwhere. Expression on both actors faces as well, I didn't feel a sense of urgency from doll face, the "oh man I gotta get outta here!" And when the guy finds her he seems rather "meh" ...I hope this helps and that I'm not nit picking..good luck !
Emilio S. Posted 7 months ago
Good attempt without the use of a dolly rig. A cheap way of doing that in the future would be to use a wheel chair.
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
If I find a wheel chair LoL, I'll try that in the future, thanks for the advice!
Gianna I. Posted 7 months ago
This was super creepy! Good job! (Team Rosalind Revenge)
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Thanks team RR!
Ayla L. Posted 7 months ago
I liked this, I thought it was a good decision, simplistic, but stately. Thats the way things aught to be! lol
Kevin G. Posted 7 months ago
Very nice, thank you!
Joel S. Posted 7 months ago
I like the way the minimal cuts enhanced the suspense of the shots and the reveal at the end with the walk-around shot!
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